Peak of Flight #13: How to get your Donation Request Thrown in the Trash Can
Apogee Components' Peak of Flight newsletter, issue 13. Date: undated; published between 2000 and 2005 (from the neighbouring dated issues).
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How to get your donation request
letter thrown in the trash
By Tim Van Milligan
If you write letters to manufacturers and vendors asking
them to donate prizes and money to your local rocket club;
I'm going to show you how to write them in such a way that
they'll be thrown away as soon as they are opened.
note: I'm not picking on anyone... I get lots of these types
of letters all the time, and I do want the clubs that write them
to succeed. After all, if clubs die out, then eventually, my business will die out too.
Basically, most "trash-can bound" letters go something
like this:
Dear Manufacturer:
I'm writing you to request your support and a donation
of merchandise for our raffle to be held at our next launch.
This is a big launch, and we're sure to get hundreds of
people to show up.
In return for your support, we'll announce your
company's name over the PA system several times during
the day, as well as put a link to your company's web site on
our club's web page. We'll also mention your company's
name in the post-launch article that we'll print in our club's
newsletter. If you can, also send some catalogs, so that we
can put them in our registration packets.
As you know, we are a non-profit organization, so any
donations you send to us are tax deductible. We are in urgent need for your donations, because we use the money
to buy rockets for the needy inner-city kids that can't afford to make their own purchases.
Thank you again for your support. Please send stuff
ASAP!!!
Signed: Local Club PR Person
If this letter doesn't get to the round file immediately, it
will get put into the "get-to-it-later pile." If other manufacturer's
are like me, they feel guilty about putting it into the trash can
immediately. Like I said, we want clubs to succeed. But unfortunately, by the time it makes it to the top of the pile; the
launch has already passed.
What is wrong with these types of donation request letters? Don't you see it? It's obvious. They are all self-centered.
They don't have the manufacturer's interests in mind at all.
Here is the thing you have to know about all manufacturers and vendors. "They are not rich, and have a limited amount
of money that they can spend on advertising."
Doug Pratt has a saying that goes something like this: "If
you want to make a small fortune in the hobby business, you
better start out with a large one." If the history of rocketry
doesn't tell us that this is true, it would be funny. All current
manufacturers are trying to buck this historic trend, and make
a small fortune out of nothing. So realize this: "manufacturers
and vendors have a limited amount of money that they can
spend on advertising." (I hate to be redundant, but it usually
doesn't sink in the first time people hear it.)
The purpose of advertising is to generate new customers,
or to keep the one's you've got. Since rocketry is a pretty small
hobby, manufacturers are spending a lot of money at a small
audience. They can't afford to spend it on venues that don't
generate significant results.
To be brutally honest, spending advertising dollars to chase
customers from a group of poor people (no matter how needy
they are), or as a tax dodge, is a bad business decision. The
manufacturer isn't going to tell you this, because it makes him
look like a greedy jerk. So what he'll do is just toss your letter
into the trash can instead. You'll never get a reply out of him,
or figure out why he isn't donating to your club.
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If you want good manufacturer support, you have to write
your letter in such a way as to convince him that he will receive much more in return.
But don't make the mistake to think the manufacturer
wants to advertise for the sake of "getting exposure." CocaCola can do this, but not a small rocketry vendor. There is
only one result that a manufacturer wants to get in exchange
for his advertising: "SALES"
Do I need to say it again? "A manufacturer or vendor only
wants SALES!" Can you guarantee to the manufacturer that
he'll see an increase in sales as a result of his donation? Probably not (unless you're really creative; in which case I'd personally love to hear your ideas).
So what can you tell a manufacturer in your donation request letter that will get his attention?
Returning to that sample above where the club was going
to: announce the company's name over the PA system, put a
link to the company's web site, and mention it in the postlaunch article. These are a good start, but unfortunately, they
are old techniques, and don't generate "SALES." Why not?
Because the manufacturer doesn't have any control over the
message that is delivered.
The PA systems are useless at getting messages out. If
they were great, then the RSO would never have to scream at
the crowd during a head's up launch.
You need to get creative! Think of things that your club
has that would be valuable to the manufacturer. Try these for
a start:
1. The club's roster. Most manufacturer's would love that
information, so they could send direct mail to them.
2. Tell the manufacturer about recent product reviews that
were printed in the club's newsletter. If you show the manufacturer that you've been proactive in helping him generate
sales prior to the launch, he'll be more willing to support the
club later. Your actions prior to the launch are more convincing than good intentions later.
3. Offer to print up coupons (with the manufacturer's prior
approval of the artwork). These coupons could be put into the
packet given to "new members" of the club. Don't expect the
manufacturer to print them up themselves; because they rarely
have time to devote to running down to the local copy shop
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for a small coupon. Hint: Whatever you can do to relieve the
manufacturer of a burdensome activity, he'll be grateful for
when it comes to donation time.
4. In addition to supplying the manufacturer with the club's
roster, also collect the names and addresses of each and every
person that comes out to the launch. Those are great "fresh"
prospects for manufacturers.
5. Instead of printing the name of each sponsor in the
club's newsletter; give each one free ad space in the newsletter. Again, the manufacturer wants and needs to control the
artwork so they can target the ad for the particular club.
6. Like number 3, instead of asking for catalogs for the
registration packets, tell the manufacturer that you'll print up
coupons for the people to send in and request a catalog. That
is cheaper for the manufacturer, and it helps him prequalify
the people in advance. Not everyone that gets a catalog in a
registration packet is interested in the products that the manufacturer might be selling.
7. Offer testimonials for the manufacturer, particularly
on the club's web site. This doesn't have to be like: "He's the
GREATEST manufacturer," but should be something like;
"He's an honest vendor, and has been supplying items in a
timely fashion to our club members."
As you can see, these ways to offer something back to the
manufacturer are very inexpensive. And they are things that
manufacturers would value. This could make the difference
between having your letter thrown in the trash can, or getting
donations that you want. If all else fails, it is something different than the typical donation request letter.
About the Author:
Tim Van Milligan is the owner of Apogee Components
(http://www.apogeerockets.com) and the curator of the rocketry education web site: http://www.apogeerockets.com/education. He is also the author of the books: "Model Rocket Design and Construction," "69 Simple Science Fair Projects with
Model Rockets: Aeronautics" and publisher of the FREE ezine newsletter about model rockets. You can subscribe to the
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